This site looks GREAT! keep up the great work. I would recommend typing the ‘game of the week’ onto the site, rather than scanning the blue document from your manual. This is pretty hard to read.
I would edit your intro paragraph just a little bit–a few of your sentences are ‘run ons’. Otherwise it looks great!
Who is your target market? How will you advertise your site? questions questions….
congrats on what you have so far. You are doing a great job!
May 11, 2009
11:49 am
Hello Emily!
This site looks GREAT! keep up the great work. I would recommend typing the ‘game of the week’ onto the site, rather than scanning the blue document from your manual. This is pretty hard to read.
I would edit your intro paragraph just a little bit–a few of your sentences are ‘run ons’. Otherwise it looks great!
Who is your target market? How will you advertise your site? questions questions….
congrats on what you have so far. You are doing a great job!
~Michelle Cummings
Training Wheels